Sunday, January 22, 2012

scene1 first showing


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  1. Bravo!! That was really good. I liked the way you reacted to your partners' tough questions. My only suggestion would be to try to play on your characters nervousness. It's clear that she's uncomfortable and unsure if she should be there so maybe you can seem really jittery, scared, and even confused. Other than that, I really enjoyed it!! :)

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    1. Thanks for the feedback Sade:) I really appreciate it! I need all the feedback and suggestions I can get haha. I totally agree that I need to add more of the nervous feeling to everything my character does, I'll work on that:) THANK YOU!

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  2. i think we both need to work on knowing our lines better so they can be delivered more quickley when they need to be..because the parts where one person is suppose to get cut off doesn't sound real. I can work on having more of a variety of emotions when I talk.

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  3. I think you guys did a really good job. You really had us all believing that you were literally scared and nervous.It was an over all really really good!!!!

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  4. I think y'all did good! Just maybe be a little louder next time and put your emotions on your face a little more

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